Charli Mills’ challenge at https://carrotranch.com/ for this week involved a honeymoon ending. Follows is a sad tale told in 99 words.

 

First Night                                                          

Written by Kerry E.B. Black

Melinda’s fingers trembled as she applied sheer lipstick and adjusted her frilly negligee. She recalled Pachelbel’s Canon, timing her heartbeats to its smooth rhythm as she had her footfalls six hours earlier. She had forgotten to lower her veil, and her father’s shocked expression when he went to raise it for her give-away kiss made her giggle. Rosemary and carnations scented the air, and almond lotion softened her skin. Removing the hairpins and brushing out the up-do took an hour.

Her groom knocked. Butterflies assailed her as she opened to him.

He said, face stony, “We made a mistake.”

diamond wedding rings

 

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